In this video I will be going over a summary of LGBT representation in WoW. While I didn’t mention EVERY instance of LGBT representation in game I feel I talked about the highlights. If you have any suggestions on what the next video should be please let me know in the comment section!
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A brief representation of the slow and painful downfall of the game about war between humans and orcs I used to love which now has rainbows everywhere and there are no true villains left anymore, they all immerse into feelings and there is no point on calling it World of Warcraft anymore.
yoo. it’s gay time :3
A tip I can use is that it can be less clunky, faster, and more inclusive to say “queer” instead of LGBTQ+ every time. Queer is a catch all term that can apply to anyone under that umbrella. Whatever you want to do is fine tho. They both work.
it’s cool that they included a trans masc character because the vast majority of representation (and to be fair most trans people) or trans fem characters.
I’ve also heard many trans people uses MMOs, particularly WoW as part of their trans journey, so it’s cool that it’s a pretty accepting place.
Anyways constructive criticism time. Your script reading could use a little work. at times it felt more like reading a script for a school project than something you were interested in (if you need a specific example the last 30 seconds works). You also stumbled over your words a few times and decided to not redo the take. if you want a more polished product I recommend redoing bad takes, trying something to make yourself sound more enthused about it (how will depend on you), and most importantly just practice. You can try all you want, but ultimately it’s mostly just practice.